{"id":145483,"date":"2010-01-06T12:58:02","date_gmt":"2010-01-06T17:58:02","guid":{"rendered":"tag:business.theatlantic.com,2010:\/\/3.33043"},"modified":"2010-01-06T12:52:14","modified_gmt":"2010-01-06T17:52:14","slug":"newspaper-stories-are-too-long-lets-fix-them","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/145483","title":{"rendered":"Newspaper Stories are Too Long. Let&#8217;s Fix Them."},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Michael Kinsley wrote a column about why news stories should be shorter. <a href=\"http:\/\/www.theatlantic.com\/doc\/201001\/short-writing\">It&#8217;s really good.<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Newspaper stories take too long to tell us what&#8217;s new. Banal quotes from experts I&#8217;ve never heard of don&#8217;t help. Windy introductions to set the geopolitical stage are worthless. Thousand-word front-page articles that provide no more new information than a ticker bulletin aren&#8217;t marginally better, but mostly just longer.<\/p>\n<p>The Internet provides the opportunity to break free of the newspaper straitjacket of inverted pyramids and column inches. Google is tinkering with a new thing they call &#8220;living stories.&#8221; These are topic pages for ideas like <a href=\"http:\/\/livingstories.googlelabs.com\/lsps\/afghanistan#OVERVIEW:false,false,false,n,n,n:null;\">&#8220;The War in Afghanistan&#8221;<\/a> that create timelines for news stories so you can follow developments and fit them into a storyline. That&#8217;s a good idea. Spencer Ackerman says individual writers should try the same thing by using topic tags and the blog format to create updating pages that follow a story&#8217;s development. That&#8217;s another good idea. <\/p>\n<p>One can imagine the emergence of a kind of &#8220;story tree&#8221; where all the major developments of a big story like health care reform would live on an constantly updating page. Each new development could have two parts: What Was New (in a sentence) and Why It Mattered (in a paragraph). That&#8217;s it. No quotes because the voice is omniscient. No lede because the intro is already on the page. The Internet&#8217;s capacity for linking practically begs for stories to talk to each other in a way that is impossible on a single ream of paper. The best way to harness that capacity is to be brief and let your old work do some of the talking.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/livingstories.googlelabs.com\/lsps\/afghanistan#OVERVIEW:false,false,false,n,n,n:null;\">Finally, here&#8217;s<\/a> a good round-up of reactions to Kinsley&#8217;s piece from Atlantic Wire. <br \/><br clear=\"both\" style=\"clear: both;\"\/><br \/>\n<br clear=\"both\" style=\"clear: both;\"\/><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:13cc836ad5c43d1d52d909159128fafe:DpWUNNhWus%2BRb0ykfunuBewVwPPhVwLyeBklWNVNkEncOgspjFuKjeuJ38RWo%2BQaV04FYdukk2%2F9'><img border='0' title='Email this Article' alt='Email this Article' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/emailthis.png'\/><\/a><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:2f2d427aad7462db7e362e65644b1b1f:jO9pyV0G%2FpP3K3fB%2FZs8X1PbcaTKlCtI7T6m0qpCqbFCnJGZDdHNwX%2Bn9YcmzdZAIhGDIL14I%2BjJ'><img border='0' title='Add to digg' alt='Add to digg' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/digg.gif'\/><\/a><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:971664143fa1c1232a9a85044a8ffe47:P69fqhCjukExz02UTsE4LG2834RNytHIpoQibU9VbkDLeIlIYd6WdSgoeryje%2BqZzWeh6ibHFtda'><img border='0' title='Add to Reddit' alt='Add to Reddit' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/reddit.png'\/><\/a><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:88e857eea7d495168554ef56690fc8dc:437FWXI2XPGMIvADBmR2QqwXt88XRriTndLpFT43GUkd5uDUVvWfVqPcm0lU2MzXJwUf0CtlYhhogQ%3D%3D'><img border='0' title='Add to Twitter' alt='Add to Twitter' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/twitter.png'\/><\/a><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:38911ab32266f825d0fe88250c3b89ee:JibeUNuJ4MDcF6PlT0MKKVfla4Ko4MxPp6b7NKWsKyZIMTMuW54DJztean9%2FLgvGIR6b5qIy8QBg'><img border='0' title='Add to del.icio.us' alt='Add to del.icio.us' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/delicious.gif'\/><\/a><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:6dc9626d9665edad7c35c72e5624c018:MBHBCsZhRTH9cwwKrXdZZxUinyR8kVKERxStpAVhlymP87nhRIhflC7bd0Ax%2FekO6X4bRJKhNCxAhg%3D%3D'><img border='0' title='Add to StumbleUpon' alt='Add to StumbleUpon' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/stumbleit.gif'\/><\/a><br \/>\n  <a style='font-size: 10px; color: maroon;' href='http:\/\/www.pheedcontent.com\/hostedMorselClick.php?hfmm=v3:7c006382c4d24460103f88be7a30e6a2:uKiAZ%2Fp8KNvMNWzdAS857bDf64HbazsrpGqfUIme5HwDuvsL5kSvLbw0t%2FFPxqd1tt%2FnG%2BL1YrwIkg%3D%3D'><img border='0' title='Add to Facebook' alt='Add to Facebook' src='http:\/\/images.pheedo.com\/images\/mm\/facebook.gif'\/><\/a><br \/>\n<br clear=\"both\" style=\"clear: both;\"\/><br \/>\n<a href=\"http:\/\/ads.pheedo.com\/click.phdo?s=cf190e64372e1c499200a56fa81544d1&#038;p=1\"><img decoding=\"async\" alt=\"\" style=\"border: 0;\" border=\"0\" src=\"http:\/\/ads.pheedo.com\/img.phdo?s=cf190e64372e1c499200a56fa81544d1&#038;p=1\"\/><\/a><br \/>\n<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"\" height=\"0\" width=\"0\" border=\"0\" style=\"display:none\" src=\"http:\/\/a.rfihub.com\/eus.gif?eui=2225\"\/><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/feeds.feedburner.com\/~r\/AtlanticBusinessChannel\/~4\/ivC52P3Dzu8\" height=\"1\" width=\"1\"\/><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Michael Kinsley wrote a column about why news stories should be shorter. It&#8217;s really good. Newspaper stories take too long to tell us what&#8217;s new. Banal quotes from experts I&#8217;ve never heard of don&#8217;t help. Windy introductions to set the geopolitical stage are worthless. Thousand-word front-page articles that provide no more new information than a [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1534,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-145483","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-news"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/145483","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1534"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=145483"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/145483\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=145483"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=145483"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mereja.media\/index\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=145483"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}